秋荻荻 发表于 2005-6-12 19:10:52

[原创][杀文] 狼烟追杀令

<P ><FONT size=3>[杀文] 狼烟追杀令<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>只要有人的地方<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>就有江湖<FONT face="Times New Roman">; </FONT>只要有江湖的地方<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>就有狼烟煞的势力<FONT face="Times New Roman">; </FONT>只要有狼烟煞的势力<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>就有狼烟追杀令<FONT face="Times New Roman">!<p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>狼烟山沓沓一柱孤烟<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>改变许多人的命运。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>如果你问狼烟煞的人多不多<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>江湖人多半都会回答<FONT face="Times New Roman">: </FONT>不多<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>真正说得上是狼烟煞的<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>就这幺一个<FONT face="Times New Roman"> – </FONT>朗云嫣。<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>但如果你问执行狼烟追杀令多不多<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>江湖人多半都会不回答<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>因为他们马上拔腿就跑。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>为什幺<FONT face="Times New Roman">? </FONT>那幺你有没有兴趣被全江湖的人追杀<FONT face="Times New Roman">?<p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>狼烟煞其实是只不过是一个组织<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>杀人的组织。与其它杀手组织不同<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>它却是江湖史上最不神秘、最透明的组织。<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>然而在所有人的心目中<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>它却偏偏不单单是一个杀人组织。江湖上没有人不知<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>手刃狼烟追杀令标的者<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>将可以要求朗云嫣为他杀一个人<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>不论那个人是谁<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>而朗云嫣要杀的人<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>是没有能活着见翌日的太阳。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>所以只要你成为狼烟追杀令的目标<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>全江湖的人都会追杀你。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>那幺你就是必死无疑了<FONT face="Times New Roman">?<p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3><FONT face="Times New Roman">“</FONT>未必<FONT face="Times New Roman">…” </FONT>江湖人会回答。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>朗云嫣也有不杀的人<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>就是曾经进入《狼烟绝地》的人。<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>据说她的有一张清单<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>上面写着那些人的名字<FONT face="Times New Roman">; </FONT>只要他清单上的人物<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>他就绝对不会杀。<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>不过至今为止<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>清单上面只有他自己的名字。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>今天天朗气清<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>正是杀人的好日子。<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>烟直如毫<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>俨然在空中回舞出六个大字<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>风云门慕红受<FONT face="Times New Roman">”</FONT>。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>慕红受如今坐在西子湖畔的最出名的茶楼喝最好的酒、听最有名的歌。酒是好酒<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>十八年女儿红<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>是酒家老板的私人珍藏<FONT face="Times New Roman">; </FONT>唱歌的是酒楼老板的独女<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>呵气如兰<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>轻声软语<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>正是最青春又最脆弱的年华<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>好象轻轻放在手心也怕会捏碎一样。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>慕红受一面珍惜地凝望着<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>如欣赏一件价值连城的宝物。<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>屋外有一只小鸟无端的乍来助兴<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>只是唱到高处<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>小鸟意兴阑珊地离开。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>一曲既毕<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>酒楼老板当即拍手大笑道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>好<FONT face="Times New Roman">! </FONT>好<FONT face="Times New Roman">! </FONT>小研的歌声<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>就连黄莺也比下去。<FONT face="Times New Roman">”<p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>慕红受细心的拨弄着小研的发鬓<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>小研羞红了脸低下头来。<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>酒楼老板见状<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>又哈哈大笑道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>这女儿真是<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>你们是青梅竹马的<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>而且上个月就成亲了<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>还害什幺羞<FONT face="Times New Roman">?”<p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>就在此时<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>突然有一名大汉手持大马关刀进入<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>整个气氛都被破坏掉。毕竟<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>酒楼打开门是做生意的<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>老板云中龙低声向女儿道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>快去招呼客人<FONT face="Times New Roman">!”<p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>小研心里不愿<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>但依然温婉贤柔<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>轻轻向来人道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>客官要吃点什幺<FONT face="Times New Roman">…” </FONT>语音未落<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>那大汉竟一手拉住小研的手<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>意淫淫的笑道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>我就要吃你这幺甜的<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>这幺有没有<FONT face="Times New Roman">?” <p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>话未说完<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>突然感到一股锐气从酒楼角落射过来<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>原来不起眼的酒楼<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>剎时有了山雨欲来之势<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>大汉只感到一股强烈的压迫感<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>大汉毕竟在江湖上混了多个年头<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>本能教他知道已有劲敌在前。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>大汉霍然抬头<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>只见角落处远处坐着一名剑眉星目的男子。<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>男子轻轻一拍卓子<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>微嗢道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>放手<FONT face="Times New Roman">!” </FONT>声音不大<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>却铿锵入耳、锐气不霸<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>却不怒自威。<FONT face="Times New Roman"> </FONT>他手下轻轻一拍<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>卓子马上印出五个指印。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>大汉心中冒汗<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>口中却大笑道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>好<FONT face="Times New Roman">! </FONT>风云门透心掌<FONT face="Times New Roman">! </FONT>慕红受果然在此<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>不枉我花一百万白银从灵通子买得你的消息<FONT face="Times New Roman">!” <p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>慕红受扬眉道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>阁下不惜千金打听我下落<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>不知所为何事<FONT face="Times New Roman">?”<p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>大汉奇道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>这幺说你还不知道咧<FONT face="Times New Roman">!” <p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>慕红受强忍心下怒气<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>沉聱道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>请指教<FONT face="Times New Roman">!”<p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>大汉道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>只因狼烟煞朗云嫣已发出狼烟追杀令<FONT face="Times New Roman">!”<p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>此言一出<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>众皆愕然。小研一声惊呼<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>竟然晕了过去。大汉就剩此时拔刀欲砍<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>只见剑光一闪<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>大汉连发生什幺事情也不知道就被慕红受一剑贯穿大汉喉头。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>慕红受一个箭步上前扶住小研<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>突然腰际一痛<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>一支尖利短剑就插在他腰间<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>小剑上满是见血封喉的天下至毒鹤顶红<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>而手持短剑的竟就是小研<FONT face="Times New Roman">! </FONT>慕红受不敢相信自已的眼睛<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>大吼道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>为什幺<FONT face="Times New Roman">…</FONT>为什幺<FONT face="Times New Roman">…” </FONT>还未说完就气断而亡。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>小研望着地上新婚丈夫<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>惨笑道<FONT face="Times New Roman">: “</FONT>因为这样是令你死得最痛快的方法<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>而且可以保留为你报仇的权利。<FONT face="Times New Roman">”<p></p></FONT></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>跟据《江湖快报》纪录<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>这些人有七成以上是被至亲好友杀死<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>两成半是只有被路过的陌生人杀死<FONT face="Times New Roman">, </FONT>而只有不足一成是被宿敌世仇杀死的。<p></p></FONT></P>
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<P ><FONT size=3>《江湖快报》里<FONT face="Times New Roman">,</FONT>又添一条纪录。</FONT><p></p></P>

小胡 发表于 2005-6-15 21:31:24

狼煙追殺令挺有意思, 只是敘事部份太長,故事收筆太快,令文章失去高潮,失去餘音.
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