发表于 2007-2-26 17:54:36

〔探寻文字灵魂〕例《猎人傳奇》第N章

杨文广驻足观看,只见一个矮墩墩的老头,年约半百;另两人神情容貌一般无二,三十来岁,腰系长剑,有一人肩上扛着一个布袋,里面不知装着一个什么事物。
这三个比武的人,不是别人,正是陈渐飞、陈渐离与傅彩花,这三个当世高手,杨文广一个也不识得。
只听傅彩花道:“阁下从彭泽一路追我到此,实是我生平难识的轻功高手。”
陈渐离道:“若不是前辈一路等待,我等又如何能追得上?”
傅菜花道:“你兄长肩扛一物,原本吃亏不小,这一局算打平。”
陈渐飞笑道:“就算我身无半点牵掣,也是绝计追不上前辈,普天之下,又有谁能在轻功上胜过傅前辈?这一局我们早已输了。”
傅菜花道:“我也不跟你们夹缠,算做我赢。既然你以已之短,击我之长,我亦如此,我倒要跟你比比剑,借柄剑与我。”
陈渐飞当即解下佩剑,倒转剑尖,递了过去。
这个杨文广,家教甚严,为人也正直,观望了一会儿,见是比武,不愿偷窥别人的技艺,当下拖着枪往回走。
杨文广走了不到里许,但见却才比武的三人,风驰电挚般赶了来。
傅菜花道:“小兄弟慢走。”
杨文广道:“甚么事?”
傅菜花道:“你用枪搠我。”
杨文广道:“好端端的,我为何要用枪搠你?”
傅菜花道:“莫问为什么,你只管搠翻我,搠死也无怨。”
杨文广道:“我与你前日无仇,近日无怨,为什么要用枪来搠翻你?你倒说说理由?”
傅菜花道:“你究竟搠还是不搠?”
杨文广道:“你这人,好生无赖,莫不是特意消遣我来着?”
傅菜花道:“瞧你长的象个小姑娘,你若不用枪搠我,我便要拧你的脸。”他说着,果真欺身近前,在杨文广的脸上拧了一把。
傅菜花的身法,快的如鬼魅,杨文广竟毫无防备。虽说是被男人调戏,但杨文广只觉羞辱,当下大怒,提枪便刺。
杨家弟子久经沙场,杨家枪法是在战场中磨砺出来,武林中虽没有太大的名气,但着实是好枪法。况且杨文广深得家教,九九八十一路枪法使将出,当真有万军望而披靡之气势。

发表于 2007-2-26 18:16:12

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">杨文广驻足观看,只见一个矮墩墩的老头,年约半百;另两人神情容貌一般无二,三十来岁,腰系长剑,有一人肩上扛着一个布袋,里面不知装着一个什么事物。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">这三个比武的人,不是别人,正是陈渐飞、陈渐离与傅彩花,这三个当世高手,杨文广一个也不识得。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">只听傅彩花道:“阁下从彭泽一路追我到此,实是我生平难识的轻功高手。”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">陈渐离道:“若不是前辈一路等待,<font color="#5233cc">我等</font>又<font color="#2222dd">如何</font>能追得上?”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">傅菜花道:“你兄长肩扛一物,原本吃亏不小,这一局算打平。”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">陈渐飞笑道:“就算我身无半点牵掣,也是<font color="#1a1ae6">绝计</font>追不上前辈,普天之下,又有谁能在轻功上胜过傅前辈?这一局我们早已输了。”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">傅菜花道:“我也不跟你们夹缠,算做我赢。既然你以已之短,击我之长,我亦如此,我倒要跟你比比剑,借柄剑与我。”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">陈渐飞<font color="#4822dd">当即</font>解下佩剑,倒转剑尖,递了过去。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">这个杨文广,家教甚严,为人也正直,<font color="#3333cc">观望</font>了一会儿,见是比武,不愿偷窥别人的技艺,当下拖着枪往回走。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">杨文广走了不到<font color="#1a1ae6">里许</font>,<font color="#4d2bd5">但见</font>却才比武的三人,风驰电挚般赶了来。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">傅菜花道:“小兄弟慢走。”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">杨文广道:“甚么事?”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">傅菜花道:“你用枪搠我。”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">杨文广道:“<font color="#ee1111">好端端的</font>,我为何要用枪搠你?”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">傅菜花道:“莫问为什么,你只管搠翻我,搠死也无怨。”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">杨文广道:“我与你<font color="#ee3d11">前日无仇,近日无怨</font>,为什么要用枪来搠翻你?你<font color="#e61a1a">倒说说理由</font>?”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">傅菜花道:“你究竟搠还是不搠?”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">杨文广道:“<font color="#e61a1a">你这人,好生无赖,莫不是特意消遣我来着</font>?”</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">傅菜花道:“瞧你长的象个小姑娘,你若不用枪搠我,我便要拧你的脸。”他说着,果真欺身近前,在杨文广的脸上拧了一把。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">傅菜花的身法,快的如鬼魅,杨文广竟毫无防备。虽说是被男人调戏,但杨文广只觉羞辱,<font color="#4822dd">当下</font>大怒,提枪便刺。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">杨家弟子久经沙场,杨家枪法是在战场中磨砺出来,武林中虽没有太大的名气,但<font color="#421ae6">着实</font>是好枪法。况且杨文广深得家教,九九八十一路枪法使将出,<font color="#1a1ae6">当真</font>有万军望而披靡之气势。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#ff0000">在下观点:1写武侠小说,若能参入古典白话〔如那些蓝字〕,是否更为简练?</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#ff0000">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;2人物对白,若是能摒弃现代人的自然语言,而以纯朴的古人口吻〔当然撑握好度〕,是否别有一番风昧?</font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#ff0000"></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 6pt 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 25.4pt; mso-para-margin-top: .5gd; mso-char-indent-count: 2.0;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; LETTER-SPACING: 1.1pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><font color="#ff0000">观看了此文的人,请给我意建。若是不愿与我一块探讨,请回复:认可或不认可。</font></span></p>

岚巽儿 发表于 2007-2-26 19:29:20

<p>我同意!不过运用这些词语时却要注意,一不小心就弄得句子可能不通畅,至少会让一部分小白看不懂文意,而且武侠多用古时背景,因此要很注意不要出现现代语句尤其是那些惯用脏话黑话外来词等,可能平时不觉得,但若不小心在文中流露,便如刺哽喉了。</p>

发表于 2007-2-28 22:02:04

<font color="#0000ff">下笔千言,离题万里</font>
[此贴子已经被作者于2007-3-1 11:58:06编辑过]

燕云 发表于 2007-3-6 11:48:08

<p>地上路万千,何者是正途?</p><p>自己喜好而已,又有何简练风味之谈?</p><p></p>

小豪 发表于 2007-4-14 13:13:31

活用,不瞎用

笑三少 发表于 2011-3-13 13:49:24

武侠小说中,凡是出现粗言脏话,都为下乘之作!
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